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Strangeways: Thirsty-02


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Page two of the inked art for STRANGEWAYS: THIRSTY. Artwork by Gervasio and Jok of Estudio Haus. Script is after the jump. I think...


PAGE 2

PANEL 1
Outside the bar, Joseph is falling/being thrown out the front door. Me might see Penny’s hand open, having tossed him.


PENNY
And don’t come back until you sober up and plan to stay that way!

JOSEPH
Huuaaah!


PANEL 2
Joseph face down in the dry ground, lit by the tavern windows.

JOSEPH
Ooof!

PANEL 3
Joseph is coming to his feet.

JOSEPH
Well if that don’t beat all?

JOSEPH
Ah, who needs her anyways?


PANEL 4
Time has passed, Joseph is wandering the streets outside town. Lonely, dark, spooky. Plenty of shadows for something to be hiding in. Joseph is tired, near passing out.

CAPTION
An hour of stumbling later.

JOSEPH
Jus’ a little further. They got a bar in Drytown, I hear.

JOSEPH
Woulda been faster on a horse…


PANEL 5
Closer in, on Joseph, being watched by something. He’s unaware, lost in drunken oblivion.

SFX
Rustling of leaves

PANEL 6
Same POV. On Joseph, surprised, but slow, drunk.

JOSEPH
Huh? Whuzzat?

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